Hey everyone! Just to let you know, I wasn't supposed to post this story for a long time from now because I'm not even close to being done with I Swear, but I figured that since I was getting such a good response for I Swear, why not post both of them at the same time?! I only have 46 subbers, but that's a lot compared to what most people have. I'd absolutely love it if you'd read this one as well as I Swear. You guys are my motivation and my inspiration. Thanks for your support. Here's a little bit about the series...I have all my characters already, as you've seen in the video. I don't need any more at the moment, but if I do, I'll totally have a contest. [: JB Will N0T, i repeat, Will N0T BEC0ME FAM0US. That is simply because if I feel this story is good enough, I want to get it published. So I need as much feedback as possible...Also, I'd like to thank the people who have helped me with this story by being in it...Chelsea, Lindsay, Ashley, and Maria. Some names are spelled different. One is different, because I don't know what I was thinking when I was doing the video, but I accidentally put Megan instead of Maria, so DEMIFAN01, I am so so so sorry for that. Please forgive me. And here is the biggest part of the story...iT iS ENTiRElY iN J0E'S P0iNT 0F ViEW! You'll have to find out the rest when you read the story. So without any further adue, here is the Prologue to my new series, Invisible. Enjoy! =]] -------------------------------------------- I was walking down the street one day when I saw her. She was in the yard playing with a small puppy. She looked about my age. My brothers obviously weren't paying attention to me since I fell behind a little. I was paying so much attention to that girl that I wasn't watching where I was going and I tripped over a garbage can. She looked up to see me dusting my pants off and started laughing. Great; I ruined my chances. If that wouldn't have happened, I probably would have went over and talked to her. Why did I have to be so clumsy?! She didn't pay attention to me for long because when I looked up, she was playing with the puppy again. It looked like a Labrador Retriever; a very young one at that. Her hair was long and brown. It shone in the sun and blew with the wind. She was so gorgeous. I knew that she may never want to talk to me because I wasn't anything special, but maybe in a week or so I'd take my chances and talk to her. She smiled a lot and I loved that about a girl. She seemed so fun to be around and great with animals. My brothers let me catch up to them and we started talking about football, but somehow, I couldn't get my mind off of that girl. I asked my brothers if they had ever noticed her around school and they freaked out on me! ----------------------------------------------------- Who is the girl that Joe saw? Will he ever see her again? Or does he already know her? Find out in Chapter 1 of Invisible... Because I'm leaving this up for a few days before I start posting, I'm asking for 50 views, 10 comments and 5 rates. Hope its not too much for you guys...[: I believe you can pull it off in about 3 days...Let's get started on that, shall we?
Added: Dec 1, 2008; Author: J0NASxl0VER; Duration: 0:46; Views: 271
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